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The Bitter Version

This sometimes cruel reality I am forced to live
Another participant in this play I would happily give

The fault is no ones; nothing could change
It is their right to choose a shackled cage

My defenses are instant, careful not to stray
Before these temptations I long to submissively lay

Oh, demon, please come conquer my soul
Be damned to those who think me a fool

Entrance is sweet, like a gentle man's caress
You slowly take hold of my organs, flood, and flesh

Tears escape from the vessel once numb
For the vast life I could barely overcome

A vacant smile reflects the depths of my possession
Never to regret my true last decision

Sudden awareness breaks the form of my illusion
Silent despair intertwines my torture and confusion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/8/2012 6:42:00 PM
Oops yes I meant blood. Thanks for commenting. I really enjoy writing dark poems.
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Date: 9/8/2012 3:32:00 PM
Entrance is sweet, like a gentle mans caress; You slowly take hold of my organs, flood and flesh.. Did u mean BLOOD. Otherwise, you're living somewhere in my world.. Great Write.. TC
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