The Biscuit Maker

Going back to my childhood home today
Oaks still there even though been long away
Your memories I take with me heavy
They are on my back; leaving them___ready
To be free of oppressing memories
Remembering him in his dungarees
Yet hard seems the memory of him now
Fierce, stony was his attitude somehow
Fear and tension he did bring to the child
Leave that one; go to another for awhile
Inhale the aroma of Sweet Shrub__spring
She would take child there__ the pleasant place bring
Her kitchen pleasant aroma__biscuits
Warmth, love, food, and comfort her best portraits

(After reading Edna St. Vincent Millay,  I was impressed to write this one..)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 5:58 PM
sounds like a home filled with your loving family.a child will always brighten up the home when visiting.somehow they have that power.lol.i love small children,and crayons! can't go a day without my crayons.im obsessed with those coloring sticks.you always portray your home well,i can smell those bisquits, and i see your childhood, also i can feel your endless imagination there in that memory before you were able to put your thoughts into words.a very beautiul & cute write along with it's image.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Such inspiration and such beautiful words Sara .. reading your poetry is like a fresh new morning every day... so touching and lovely... hope u are feeling well today..luv.. Linda-Marie
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 10:57 AM
I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Sara. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Murphy Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 9:24 AM
very nice I enjiyed this and thank you so much for all of your kind comments faleshia
Strand Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Re your query Sara,biscuits are what you call cookies I believe.Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian
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April 16, 2010 at 6:02 AM
Making this one come to life. Today I will try something different, inspired by you. I will s.m. when ready. P.d. I think it is time to put another use of my thinking to write. Thank you. P.D. If you do a awesome job . I will try one my self.
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April 16, 2010 at 4:56 AM
Good morning dear heart!! Enjoyed reading this memoir!!
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