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The Birth of Dawn

Dawn's new light bursts forth from pillowed dreams in bubbling chatter of birds and bees breezing by morning glories in praise of first sky. As paling stars fall silent in sleep beyond a darkened moon, I admire the miraculous birth of new day perfected by God's hands. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 12/17/14 for Nette Onclaud's Enchantment Through a Prism Contest, Title #1

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Date: 1/1/2015 2:40:00 AM
Happy new year and congrats on the win, Rhonda
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Date: 12/30/2014 5:06:00 PM
Rhonda I want to wish you and your family peace and love in 2015. Maurice Yvonne is my pen name so as I wish you all the best I do it with my real first name, Lots Of Love Armand.
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Date: 12/30/2014 5:02:00 PM
Back to Congratulate you on your win and to fav this little gem. I was saving the fav to use with my congratulations.
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Date: 12/30/2014 2:50:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, congratulations on your win for this lovely poem. I love the way you present dawn as a new, miraculous day perfected by God. Best wishes to you in the coming New Year. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/30/2014 2:13:00 PM
congratulations Rhonda on your win ,nicely done
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Date: 12/30/2014 1:34:00 PM
Very beautiful, Rhonda. You created an enchanting image of day's birth. Congratulations on a deserved win. // paul
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Date: 12/30/2014 12:59:00 PM
I find this very beautiful and enchanting Rhonda. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/30/2014 11:36:00 AM
Congrats Rhonda.Love
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Date: 12/30/2014 11:20:00 AM
absolutely exquisite write Rhonda - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/30/2014 11:19:00 AM
So beautiful is his work,glory be to must high and congrats on the win Rhonda. Compliment of the season as I wish you happy new year in advance...hugggs
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Date: 12/19/2014 7:19:00 AM
Excellent write Rhonda, loved it. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/19/2014 5:52:00 AM
This is such an exquisite piece, Rhonda!... I have read lots of poems about morning but this is extraordinary... Big hugs for a new fav..... Arlene
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Date: 12/18/2014 9:55:00 PM
Your words form a sunrise popping up over the horizon -- lovely verses and powerful meaning! Ps. 118:24 All the best dear friend.
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Date: 12/18/2014 8:30:00 PM
I love to think of dawn being born every morning. Your poem is lovely!
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Date: 12/18/2014 2:33:00 AM
very beautiful Rhonda and moving gl in contest hugs PS have you recieved my book?
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Date: 12/18/2014 12:26:00 AM
Now this cheered me up! Beautiful!
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