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The Birth of a Stream

Snow Melting slowly Water flowing Down mountain. Soil eroding Channel widening Stream flowing swiftly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 3/11/2022 9:13:00 AM
Lovely write~the imagery, a perfect scene of the transition from winter into spring. I enjoyed this immensely. :) Paulette
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David Richmond
Date: 3/12/2022 4:34:00 PM
Thanks Paulette for your complimentary comment. This is a septolet I wrote for a poetry class I took last year. These short poems are challenging to write. I'm glad you like it.

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