The Birth of a Stream

Snow
Melting slowly
Water flowing
Down mountain.

Soil eroding
Channel widening
Stream flowing swiftly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Calasibetta Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Lovely write~the imagery, a perfect scene of the transition from winter into spring. I enjoyed this immensely. :) Paulette
Richmond Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 4:34 PM
Thanks Paulette for your complimentary comment. This is a septolet I wrote for a poetry class I took last year. These short poems are challenging to write. I'm glad you like it.
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