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Than-Bauk Variation Poetry Contest

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Sit on the bench, see the birds fly and bees in flight.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/27/2024 1:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Creative idea for the contest. Sara K

Marilene Evans
Date: 9/27/2024 1:24:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sara! Have a great weekend. Blessings.

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/23/2024 12:02:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.

Marilene Evans
Date: 9/26/2024 11:39:00 AM

Hi, Beata. Sorry for the lateness of my response, I was in Texas. Two of my cousins with their families just came from the Philippines to stay here permanently. I visited them. Thank you and blessings to you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2024 12:04:00 PM

A cute one, Marilene. Congrats on a great win

Marilene Evans
Date: 9/26/2024 11:33:00 AM

Thanks so much, Andrea. Sorry for the lateness of my response, been in Texas and just got back home. Have a great day.

Terry Flood

Date: 9/20/2024 3:03:00 PM

Just to sit and watch nature at work must inspire many a poet… including yourself it would seem. A most enjoyable winning entry, Marilene. Congratulations. Terry

Marilene Evans
Date: 9/26/2024 11:18:00 AM

Hi, Terry! Just getting back, was in Texas visiting my cousins. Had many of those moments, sitting in the bench and watching birds, butterflies and the beautiful clouds, like soft cotton balls. Thank you for visiting and sorry for the lateness of my response.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/19/2024 1:52:00 PM

I can see through picturesque words! Clever and creative take on this form! Always leaves me speechless how one can show and say so much in few syllables! Congratulations on your well deserved win talented soul! Sending you light always

Marilene Evans
Date: 9/19/2024 3:09:00 PM

Thanks so much for your kind words, appreciate it. Blessings to you.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/18/2024 7:41:00 AM

Lovely, Marilene! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Marilene Evans
Date: 9/18/2024 9:14:00 AM

Thank you, thank you, Janice! Have a great day.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/17/2024 10:01:00 PM

congratulations dear poet.

Marilene Evans
Date: 9/18/2024 9:14:00 AM

Thank you, Thriveni. Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/17/2024 5:40:00 PM

Dreamlike…seems like something’s about to happen! Congratulations, Marilene!

Marilene Evans
Date: 9/17/2024 6:49:00 PM

Thanks so much for my placement, Kim. Yes, dream of flying. Well, I'm flying to Texas on Friday and to London next month. Have a good night. Blessings to you.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/31/2024 4:34:00 PM

sweet poem Marilene

Marilene Evans
Date: 8/31/2024 9:17:00 PM

Thanks so much, V. Blessings to you. Hugs.

Joseph May

Date: 8/30/2024 6:32:00 PM

It's great taking in nature's scenery... soup mail

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/29/2024 3:07:00 PM

Hello Marilene, i would rather sit on a beach and watch the birds fly. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2024 10:01:00 AM

Hello Marilene. I do not like to be sitting in the sun. When ik wear sun screen sitting in the sun makes me sweat. I prefer dahys not ]=so humid. then i sit in the sun. I do not like sunburns or tans. Hugs. Darlene/

Marilene Evans
Date: 8/29/2024 4:12:00 PM

Hello, Darlene! Thanks for visiting. I agree, but sitting on beach under the sun gives me rashes, sitting on the bench under the shades is better for me.... lol ... Have a good day.