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Than-Bauk Variation Poetry Contest

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the birds and the bees

Sit on the bench,
see the birds fly
and bees in flight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 1:02 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Creative idea for the contest. Sara K
Evans Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 1:24 PM
Thanks so much, Sara! Have a great weekend. Blessings.
Agustin Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 12:02 AM
Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.
Evans Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:39 AM
Hi, Beata. Sorry for the lateness of my response, I was in Texas. Two of my cousins with their families just came from the Philippines to stay here permanently. I visited them. Thank you and blessings to you.
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 12:04 PM
A cute one, Marilene. Congrats on a great win
Evans Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:33 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Sorry for the lateness of my response, been in Texas and just got back home. Have a great day.
Flood Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 3:03 PM
Just to sit and watch nature at work must inspire many a poet… including yourself it would seem. A most enjoyable winning entry, Marilene. Congratulations. Terry
Evans Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:18 AM
Hi, Terry! Just getting back, was in Texas visiting my cousins. Had many of those moments, sitting in the bench and watching birds, butterflies and the beautiful clouds, like soft cotton balls. Thank you for visiting and sorry for the lateness of my response.
Empress Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 1:52 PM
I can see through picturesque words! Clever and creative take on this form! Always leaves me speechless how one can show and say so much in few syllables! Congratulations on your well deserved win talented soul! Sending you light always
Evans Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 3:09 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words, appreciate it. Blessings to you.
Canerdy Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Lovely, Marilene! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Evans Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 9:14 AM
Thank you, thank you, Janice! Have a great day.
mysore Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 10:01 PM
congratulations dear poet.
Evans Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 9:14 AM
Thank you, Thriveni. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 5:40 PM
Dreamlike…seems like something’s about to happen! Congratulations, Marilene!
Evans Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 6:49 PM
Thanks so much for my placement, Kim. Yes, dream of flying. Well, I'm flying to Texas on Friday and to London next month. Have a good night. Blessings to you.
Rose  Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 4:34 PM
sweet poem Marilene
Evans Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 9:17 PM
Thanks so much, V. Blessings to you. Hugs.
May Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 6:32 PM
It's great taking in nature's scenery... soup mail
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August 29, 2024 at 3:07 PM
Hello Marilene, i would rather sit on a beach and watch the birds fly. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 10:01 AM
Hello Marilene. I do not like to be sitting in the sun. When ik wear sun screen sitting in the sun makes me sweat. I prefer dahys not ]=so humid. then i sit in the sun. I do not like sunburns or tans. Hugs. Darlene/
Evans Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 4:12 PM
Hello, Darlene! Thanks for visiting. I agree, but sitting on beach under the sun gives me rashes, sitting on the bench under the shades is better for me.... lol ... Have a good day.
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