The Bike Ride

Cruising my bike up the beach
Gave that hot chick a bicycle ride
Hoping one day she'll be my bride
We went over the handlebars with a screech
Crashed headfirst into the hardpacked sands
Which ruined my hopes of wedding plans
Cruising my bike up the beach

Make It Seven Poetry Contest
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10/4/19

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Gauthier Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Great poem, Timothy. Yup say goodbye to wedding plans or let a LOT of time go by and hope for the best. Great entry in the contest.
Mcguire Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 8:21 PM
Your kind words are always wonderful and welcomed!
Awtry Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 7:37 AM
guilty giggling... :)
Mcguire Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 2:11 PM
Thank you PS! :)
Singh Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 5:42 AM
Funny-enjoyed a lot reading the poem.
Mcguire Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Thanks Akham! :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 2:54 AM
Ouch, I always wear a helmet, just in case. Good interpretation of the pic Good luck. Tom
Mcguire Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Thanks Tom, you never know how judging goes but it was fun writing it.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 12:53 AM
A wonderful entry. I wouldn't have been able to think up something for that pic. You did great. Blessings always, Gina
Mcguire Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 1:22 AM
Thanks Regina, stuff just pops into my head
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