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The Bike Ride

Cruising my bike up the beach Gave that hot chick a bicycle ride Hoping one day she'll be my bride We went over the handlebars with a screech Crashed headfirst into the hardpacked sands Which ruined my hopes of wedding plans Cruising my bike up the beach Make It Seven Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May 10/4/19 Picture # 1

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Date: 10/8/2019 8:15:00 PM
Great poem, Timothy. Yup say goodbye to wedding plans or let a LOT of time go by and hope for the best. Great entry in the contest.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/8/2019 8:21:00 PM
Your kind words are always wonderful and welcomed!
Date: 10/5/2019 7:37:00 AM
guilty giggling... :)
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/7/2019 2:11:00 PM
Thank you PS! :)
Date: 10/5/2019 5:42:00 AM
Funny-enjoyed a lot reading the poem.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/7/2019 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Akham! :)
Date: 10/5/2019 2:54:00 AM
Ouch, I always wear a helmet, just in case. Good interpretation of the pic Good luck. Tom
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/7/2019 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Tom, you never know how judging goes but it was fun writing it.
Date: 10/5/2019 12:53:00 AM
A wonderful entry. I wouldn't have been able to think up something for that pic. You did great. Blessings always, Gina
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/5/2019 1:22:00 AM
Thanks Regina, stuff just pops into my head

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