The Biggest Pearl Tableau

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Tableau Poetry Contest
by Joseph May
Written on August 18, 2023

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Glitter on the night A breathtaking sight Soft pearl in the sky Brings a gentle sigh Shimmering so vast Until night has passed 3

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/29/2023 10:49:00 AM

Dear Gina, this is as serene as the moon, like a pearl, hovering above the gently rippling ocean shining brightly until the sun rises! There is such a sense of movement in your lines. Nestled into the night, I am carried into morning! Well done, sweet friend! Congratulations! Blessings and hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2023 2:58:00 AM

- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Gina :) - hugs

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/20/2023 3:49:00 PM

Beautiful, Gina! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

Date: 8/20/2023 12:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win Gina, Lovely write

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/20/2023 10:53:00 AM

Cool to think of the moon as a pearl in the sky! Congratulations, Gina!

Ink Empress

Date: 8/20/2023 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations beautiful poet, i lovee this take on the prompt so ethereal and beautiful and soul warming

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/18/2023 7:50:00 PM

Such a serene image. Yes it resembles an illuminated pearl, with a soft shimmery glow. Regina you depicted it so wonderfully. A wistful vision created with words. A winner for sure.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/18/2023 6:21:00 AM

- Beautiful :) - Best wishes, Gina :) - hugs