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The Big Wheel

The speed, invigorating, damp mist, breeze through my hair, aghast at the roar's and scream's from a far, faster and faster, my palm's getting clammier and clammier, stillness in mid air, my heart skips a beat, please, please get me to my feet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/26/2012 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Lisa's "Unnamed County Fair"contest Amanda. Love, Carol
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 10/23/2012 9:47:00 AM
Thank you xx <3
Date: 7/23/2012 12:07:00 PM
Congrates on your win! Jane XoXo
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 10/23/2012 9:47:00 AM
Thank you xx <3
Date: 7/23/2012 5:07:00 AM
nice descriptions! congrats on your win!
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 10/23/2012 9:48:00 AM
Thank you xx <3
Date: 7/23/2012 3:30:00 AM
Amanda congrats on your win, love it..David
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 10/23/2012 9:48:00 AM
Thank you xx <3
Date: 7/14/2012 4:35:00 AM
Oooo. I am rolling with your words... Nice poem... Terry
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Amanda Sullivan
Date: 7/14/2012 6:09:00 AM
Hi Terry, glad you like it and feel like you are rolling at the fair!!!! Means a lot thank you have a good day xx <3

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