Amanda Sullivan Poet Ballad

The Big Wheel

The speed, invigorating,
damp mist, breeze through my hair,
aghast at the roar's and scream's from a far,
faster and faster,
my palm's getting clammier and clammier,
stillness in mid air,
my heart skips a beat,
please, please get me to my feet.

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 26, 2012 at 6:44 AM Congratulations on your placement in Lisa's "Unnamed County Fair"contest Amanda. Love, Carol Amanda Sullivan October 23, 2012 at 9:47 AM Thank you xx <3

Jane Kostman July 23, 2012 at 12:07 PM Congrates on your win! Jane XoXo Amanda Sullivan October 23, 2012 at 9:47 AM Thank you xx <3

Ilene Bauer July 23, 2012 at 5:07 AM nice descriptions! congrats on your win! Amanda Sullivan October 23, 2012 at 9:48 AM Thank you xx <3

David Williams July 23, 2012 at 3:30 AM Amanda congrats on your win, love it..David Amanda Sullivan October 23, 2012 at 9:48 AM Thank you xx <3

Terry O'Leary July 14, 2012 at 4:35 AM Oooo. I am rolling with your words... Nice poem... Terry Amanda Sullivan July 14, 2012 at 6:09 AM Hi Terry, glad you like it and feel like you are rolling at the fair!!!! Means a lot thank you have a good day xx <3