The Big Sleep

I'm in a tight spot
this guns for hire
sure it spits fire
but only six shots

I'm in nightmare alley
down a side street
I see a red light
no black angel's in sight

there's no place to pray
no sacred way
just a frightened city
a place with no pity

I'm not a big shot
I got no big deal
I'm just illegal
looking to steal

the cops had me cornered
it's my last day
no reasonable doubt
no chance of a stay

the big house wants me
I want to live
it's time to quit
for the law won't forgive

this is my story
crime ain't no glory
just a public defender
my case out to tender

high walls of San Quintin
they hem me in
just a high window
no visits from kin

I can't tell a lie
each dawn I die
behind locked doors
but the damned don't cry

I'm for the big sleep
I'm feeling the heat
it's time for the pay-off
my maker to meet
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Date: 5/27/2020 6:48:00 AM
Stark and succinct, and a great read! One big nutshell of a poem, excellent piece Alan. Hats off to you ~mo
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Date: 5/27/2020 7:02:00 AM
Thanks so much. An earlier poem received no comments after 51 views. So pleased to get one.
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