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The Big Puddle In the Park

Rain fell with thunder, Children laugh as they run through, Soon to become damp.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/22/2025 11:25:00 PM
Hey Alexander, how r yah? Yes children mostly hate it to rain but some of them was laughing out loud through it. I invite u to read some of my poems because it's good for ur soul and maybe comment on it. My poems are about Eternal God & u might want to start with my poem, "Eternal". Okay I'll go, take care and thank u in advance.
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