Raul Moreno Poet Senryu

The Big Dipper

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From Ursa Major
Better known as the Great Bear,
Comes the big dipper.

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Abe Lopez April 18, 2009 at 12:26 PM I like the constellation.

Carolyn Devonshire April 7, 2009 at 4:51 PM Love the Senryu as well as the creative layout! Your artistry knows many forms, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Steve Edmonds April 5, 2009 at 5:26 PM You are a true master of your art forms. You create such wonder and give us awe through your work.

Josh Torres April 4, 2009 at 10:10 PM hahaha i get it >>>josh

Anna-Marie Docherty April 4, 2009 at 1:05 AM Nice Haiku form, and love how you've added the way we see the constellations formed. Thanks for your kindness of commenting/reading my works...Anna-Marie.

Chris Goombi April 3, 2009 at 8:36 PM Now I'll have to see if I can see it in the sky, thanks for showing us this great shape.

Elizabeth Neal April 3, 2009 at 8:23 PM Nice shape, I like this constellation where the big dipper dwells.

Tyler Martin April 3, 2009 at 7:52 PM Nice constellation, your creativity always delivers. Tyler

Daniel Neal April 3, 2009 at 11:34 AM Nice haiku, excellent constellation. DN

John Loving Iii April 2, 2009 at 1:30 PM i don't remember that one star all the way to the left. john

Lena Townsend April 2, 2009 at 7:32 AM This is nice. I love the stars. So magical and always a great muse. Wonderful writing~ I love the visual here as well... You captured it perfectly. Smiles from Lolita

Michael Jordan April 2, 2009 at 7:19 AM Raul this is excellent - Great job on this my friend - God Bless, MJ

Sharon Winter April 2, 2009 at 6:38 AM Raul, you are very 'spacey' today. Enjoying these. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins April 2, 2009 at 5:45 AM This is a very unique piece Raul..your creativity is boundless.