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The Big Dipper

. * * * . * * * From Ursa Major Better known as the Great Bear, Comes the big dipper.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/18/2009 12:26:00 PM
I like the constellation.
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Date: 4/7/2009 4:51:00 PM
Love the Senryu as well as the creative layout! Your artistry knows many forms, Raul! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/5/2009 5:26:00 PM
You are a true master of your art forms. You create such wonder and give us awe through your work.
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Date: 4/4/2009 10:10:00 PM
hahaha i get it >>>josh
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Date: 4/4/2009 1:05:00 AM
Nice Haiku form, and love how you've added the way we see the constellations formed. Thanks for your kindness of commenting/reading my works...Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:36:00 PM
Now I'll have to see if I can see it in the sky, thanks for showing us this great shape.
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:23:00 PM
Nice shape, I like this constellation where the big dipper dwells.
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Date: 4/3/2009 7:52:00 PM
Nice constellation, your creativity always delivers. Tyler
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:34:00 AM
Nice haiku, excellent constellation. DN
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Date: 4/2/2009 1:30:00 PM
i don't remember that one star all the way to the left. john
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Date: 4/2/2009 7:32:00 AM
This is nice. I love the stars. So magical and always a great muse. Wonderful writing~ I love the visual here as well... You captured it perfectly. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/2/2009 7:19:00 AM
Raul this is excellent - Great job on this my friend - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/2/2009 6:38:00 AM
Raul, you are very 'spacey' today. Enjoying these. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/2/2009 5:45:00 AM
This is a very unique piece Raul..your creativity is boundless.
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