The best you can be

Where the railroad tracks bend,
as night gave way to dawn,
lonely short pines and sage bough'd low,
wind singing in morning dew' song.

Her words drift off in echo'd calamity  
warmth lost in a familiar revelry   
still see fit to say, please stay..   
try your best and don't forget 
you'll always belong to me.  

Way up in darkest blue,
lone somber plane flies on 
leaving a trailing taunt.

Loved by one who knew 
what it meant bein' strong,  
and what it is to be lonely
in strength..
with a heart kept at bay  
and always at arm's length.

Her words echo ever on 
like ripples in a pond..  
go on.

Live your dreams
just as I promise to  
be the best you can be..
just not with me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 10:42 AM
- What way is expected in this relationship to inspire yourself and make you be more of the best you can be? ... a lot of ripples and confusions, if you ask me :) - Have a happy weekend, Richard :) - hugs
Theraven Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 9:29 PM
Well wishes go both ways. Hope you have happy weekend too Anne-Lise. -Richard
Greenhough Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 9:47 PM
Such a sad parting. Give thanks for a disaster relationship avoided. Love must be mutual.
Theraven Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 9:26 PM
Hi Hilda, Just a tale as old as time. Came to me from the parking lot stuck of the crossroads in my mind. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 1:01 PM
oh the last part is heart breaking. Great poetry!
Theraven Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 8:59 PM
Andrea, Thanks for the comment. The ending doesn't have to be. But for Romeo & Juliet perhaps - "Parting is such sweet sorrow". -Richard
M  Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 11:23 PM
Oh that is truly lovely Richard especially the last stanza! Debx
Theraven Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 11:39 PM
Words still hold power over us. Thank you for the kind words Deb. -Richard
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