The Best Poem

The Best Poem.

My best poem is the one I did not write.
It was full of Love, Joy, Peace and all that’s right.
It shine in minds eye at night, oh such a beautiful plight. 
It’s all right I did not write my best poem tonight.
It’s for another day when all will say my best poem is right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 3:57 AM
cute lil poem.. i know its a tricky title and was curious to know how you did it.. :)
Hardison Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 11:11 PM
As with other poems the whole idea was to make myself feel better. I call it writing myself 'UP'. Unlike the boss did.
Pinet Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Good little ditty with a feel good message. Emile.
Hardison Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Writing it I needed the encouragement that comes from within. Thank much for your comment.
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 11:21 AM
Very nice pen! Enjoyed your very nice piece dear friend! This made me smile. Have a lovely weekend! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Hardison Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 11:16 PM
Glad you like it. Some times a smile is a mile way. So smile or walk a mile. Have a good one.
Roper Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 8:31 AM
John, what a beautiful write, sometimes those best poems need to stay close to your heart and kept private. Blessings 7
Roper Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Very true : ) Blessings Sir and welcome, I've only been here since August and everyone here is wonderful and very inspiring.
Hardison Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Correction. If I kept it close to my heart it would be so bottled up the cork would pop.
Hardison Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 2:43 PM
I am new to this page.Thanks for the feed back. If I kept it close to my heart it would be so bottled of the cork pop.
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