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The Best Gift of Freedom

With you there is no measurement of what is right and what isn’t... All I see in you is evil... Your eyes when they wept they produce acid rain that washes the best part of my life away... Your touch burn like hell and drains all the joy left in me... Your word they are disturbing and lack comfort... Your presence chases all atom of serenity in an environment away... But still yet I still stayed with you... You broke me... I thought i couldn’t live without you... But we have gotten to the end of our tunnel.. I won’t break down this time or cry I have found a reason to live... A reason to move on... And that reason is you...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/14/2024 11:25:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/5/2016 3:17:00 PM
Jennifer,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 7:57:00 PM
JENNIFER, enjoyed reading your poem... HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 9/15/2010 12:31:00 PM
Oh Jennifer we share this in common. Your words and emotions come through so loud and clear. Please read my poem "Marriage". Thank you for this piece Monica
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