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The beginning

First came the moon, stars and sun This is where it all began With dinosaur and chimpanzees they say We evolved from these We learned to do everything that's right But we also learned bad things like lie cheat And fight. So we look at the beginning the future the End. When the earth stop's fighting and we all make Amends

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Date: 11/10/2023 2:38:00 PM
your poem is a mini time capsule in a way with a focus on learning to fight. I, too, wonder when the fighting stops? Will it ever...is it the future and our end. Your poem gave me pause. Nicely done, Paul, enjoy your evening, Sara
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