Savannah Rose Harper Poet Couplet

The Bee's Discovery

I have found it at last
 Flower told in legends past
    
Its color vibrant as gold
My furry body it will hold

I have had no color since my birth
This is the only color left on Earth

Its yellow beauty is so bright
Brighter than the noon sun’s light

Now on my flower I must feed
The flavor-filled pollen it will bleed
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This is for a picture Abe Lopez asked me to write a poem on from Raul Moreno's pictures

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Raul Moreno March 23, 2010 at 12:47 AM This is still one of my favorite poems, you did an amazing job and I sneak in and read it from time to time...Raul

Sara Kendrick September 23, 2009 at 12:43 PM Very descriptive writing here. Keep writing. Sara

Abe Lopez September 22, 2009 at 4:12 PM Savannah I'm so proud of you and the work you are creating ..... this is a nicely written piece! Alopez====

Carrie Richards September 22, 2009 at 3:45 PM You did a first rate job!! Wonderful poem! ~ Carrie

Raul Moreno September 22, 2009 at 1:22 PM Wow, I like the legend of the only colored flower. You did an amazing job, this one's for my fav's...Raul