The Bees

The bees make honey, the birds eat the bees
Help flowers to grow when bees become compost
Enables the bees collect nectar produced by flowers.
Bees again make honey, the circle goes on
Entwined together to the cycle of life and death
Evidence of extinction they are considered when
Starting to disappear fast on the earth

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July 10, 2014
Form: Acrostic
Dr. Ram Mehta
Sixth Place Win
Contest: Acrostic 2 by Linda
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A   Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Hi Dr RAm, thank you for the reply..Linda
Deschler Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:54 AM
An interesting write on the life of bees and how they are entwined with nature. Very nice acrostic poem, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 2:18 PM
Prodigious win!!! Sara
Lindley Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Congrats on your win!!!! Yes, the bees in USA are disappearing at an alarming rate. A very serious problem..
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Educational work that you have penned for the contest and it is a great winner..Thanks for the visit to say congrats..Your comment are appreciated..Sara
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 6:18 AM
wonderful acrostic Dr Mehta - when we have no bees our life cycle will end. Hugs Jan xxx
Kimathi Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 3:21 AM
This is a very wonderful acrostic poem, Dr. Ram Mehta! I'll start writing acrostic poems too! :-)Applause to your well, deserved win! :-)
A   Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for the awesome Acrostic Poem. Enjoy my blog "Dedicated to You" --and YOU" if you like. Have fun enjoying all the winning poems. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Mehta Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 1:47 AM
Thanks for the appreciation of my poem, Linda
A. Sharma Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 1:36 PM
Very fine acrostic Dr Ram ! U r right it's a vicious cycle,, life n death n life again,, gl in contest!
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