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The Beauty Within

Hidden in the nature the beauty within, Upon the sky glaze into my eyes, The beauty that rhymes inside my heart, Beating to speak out loud and beyond, To the world of unknown, That runs throw each place of unsure, Upon my eyes, Tears by tears gain, Drop by drop, Suddenly became the oceans depth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/23/2009 6:54:00 PM
Very inspiring about the power within, thanks for sharing. Moses
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Date: 7/8/2009 2:33:00 AM
Like your writing. Sara
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Date: 6/14/2009 12:16:00 AM
Love the senryu in the last three lines Shirin.Thank you for your welcome comments on my poeting today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/13/2009 4:26:00 AM
yes Shirin! you have captured the 'essence' of the human spirit! lines 5 with 6 is SO true!!! really wonderful poem! Jim
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