Lynn Marie Poet Rhyme

The Beauty of Summer

As days become longer
Warm air blankets our skin
The sky feels more open
Something new is to begin.

What could be anything
Our destiny unknown
In the air is a freshness
New souls will be born.

With each moment singing
It's own unique tune
The open seas lift us up
We become one with the moon.

To laugh, breathe
Love and simply be
The beauty of summer
When we are happy and carefree.









reworked 08-08-2016

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James Inman August 21, 2019 at 8:27 AM Oh to be carefree once again.

Chris Hagy September 24, 2017 at 2:29 PM Stopping in again on this lovely summer write...seems we are having an extended summer in the mitten..upper 80s and low 90s whew!...and no cool ocean near the barns haha! Have great week :)

Robert Lindley April 14, 2017 at 5:42 AM I can never find proper words to express how much I love summer and I always have. Your closing stanza in this fine piece reminds me of my youth and my love of the sun my friend. A7

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2017 at 10:45 PM I Adore the summer and I LOVE this poem. It's one of the best I read tonight. Gotta fave it!!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 26, 2016 at 12:06 PM - A beautiful poem about a delicious summer, Lynn :) - the summer is over and autumn is coming - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Lynn Marie August 27, 2016 at 3:32 PM ..I always appreciate the 'sunshine' you bring Anne-Lise :-) Thank you so very much for your lovely words :-) :-)

Chris Hagy August 18, 2016 at 7:30 PM Beautiful flowing rhyme Lynn...love summer! Lynn Marie August 19, 2016 at 10:44 PM ...thank you so much chris..I love summer too..have a lovely weekend :-)

Bl Devnath August 18, 2016 at 11:04 AM Bumper summer brings bumper prize, lovely done. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl Lynn Marie August 18, 2016 at 11:51 AM ..i appreciate your kind words.."bumper summer" also brings beautiful friends by to visit..thank you :-)

Richard Lamoureux August 14, 2016 at 8:36 AM You captured the feel of summer. We are having a beautiful summer here in Kelowna, British Columbia. Lynn Marie August 18, 2016 at 11:53 AM ..I appreciate your kindness..you could write a novel of your pretty corner of the world :-)

Vladislav Raven August 13, 2016 at 2:14 PM Hi Lynn, a beautiful summer song comes from your pen. This is excellent soft poetry, soft like the summer itself. The visions come through so clearly, the sun is surely smiling. This one did come from the heart Lynn. Have a good day. This is a definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX Lynn Marie August 18, 2016 at 12:11 PM ..thank you very much mike...your kindness and visits are always inspiring :-)

Connie Marcum Wong August 10, 2016 at 10:49 PM You have captured the gift of summer in this lovely piece Lynn. I can tell it was inspired. ; ) 7 Lynn Marie August 18, 2016 at 12:08 PM ..thank you so much connie..you know "inspired beauty" well..you live it too..we are blessed :-)

Daniel Turner August 8, 2016 at 4:29 PM My favorite line is "being one with the moon." Enjoyed reading your pleasant and peaceful poem of summer, Lynn. Fall is just around the corner and the leaves are already changing here. Lynn Marie August 8, 2016 at 6:04 PM Funny you mention that line...I reworked this poem and that line was the first I changed! Thank you for your encouragement! lynn

Tim Smith August 8, 2016 at 1:59 PM Very uplifting poem Lynn. Just what the doctor ordered today : ) Lynn Marie August 8, 2016 at 3:45 PM Thank you for your kind words, lynn