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The Beauty of Summer

As days become longer Warm air blankets our skin The sky feels more open Something new is to begin. What could be anything Our destiny unknown In the air is a freshness New souls will be born. With each moment singing It's own unique tune The open seas lift us up We become one with the moon. To laugh, breathe Love and simply be The beauty of summer When we are happy and carefree. reworked 08-08-2016

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James Inman

Date: 8/21/2019 8:27:00 AM

Oh to be carefree once again.

Chris Hagy

Date: 9/24/2017 2:29:00 PM

Stopping in again on this lovely summer write...seems we are having an extended summer in the mitten..upper 80s and low 90s whew!...and no cool ocean near the barns haha! Have great week :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/14/2017 5:42:00 AM

I can never find proper words to express how much I love summer and I always have. Your closing stanza in this fine piece reminds me of my youth and my love of the sun my friend. A7

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2017 10:45:00 PM

I Adore the summer and I LOVE this poem. It's one of the best I read tonight. Gotta fave it!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2016 12:06:00 PM

- A beautiful poem about a delicious summer, Lynn :) - the summer is over and autumn is coming - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/27/2016 3:32:00 PM

..I always appreciate the 'sunshine' you bring Anne-Lise :-) Thank you so very much for your lovely words :-) :-)

Chris Hagy

Date: 8/18/2016 7:30:00 PM

Beautiful flowing rhyme Lynn...love summer!

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/19/2016 10:44:00 PM

...thank you so much chris..I love summer too..have a lovely weekend :-)

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/18/2016 11:04:00 AM

Bumper summer brings bumper prize, lovely done. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/18/2016 11:51:00 AM

..i appreciate your kind words.."bumper summer" also brings beautiful friends by to visit..thank you :-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/14/2016 8:36:00 AM

You captured the feel of summer. We are having a beautiful summer here in Kelowna, British Columbia.

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/18/2016 11:53:00 AM

..I appreciate your kindness..you could write a novel of your pretty corner of the world :-)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/13/2016 2:14:00 PM

Hi Lynn, a beautiful summer song comes from your pen. This is excellent soft poetry, soft like the summer itself. The visions come through so clearly, the sun is surely smiling. This one did come from the heart Lynn. Have a good day. This is a definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/18/2016 12:11:00 PM

..thank you very much mike...your kindness and visits are always inspiring :-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/10/2016 10:49:00 PM

You have captured the gift of summer in this lovely piece Lynn. I can tell it was inspired. ; ) 7

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/18/2016 12:08:00 PM

..thank you so much connie..you know "inspired beauty" well..you live it too..we are blessed :-)

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/8/2016 4:29:00 PM

My favorite line is "being one with the moon." Enjoyed reading your pleasant and peaceful poem of summer, Lynn. Fall is just around the corner and the leaves are already changing here.

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/8/2016 6:04:00 PM

Funny you mention that line...I reworked this poem and that line was the first I changed! Thank you for your encouragement! lynn

Tim Smith

Date: 8/8/2016 1:59:00 PM

Very uplifting poem Lynn. Just what the doctor ordered today : )

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/8/2016 3:45:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, lynn