The Beautiful Star In My Night.(1)
I saw d stars and moon
bow before your feet
Istooped and wonder
right then my heart
begins to wonder
and then i maevel at your beauty
and the spectacular
feature of your gaity
Your blue eyes
made me think i was in heaven
but when i saw the moon and stars above me
then i knew i was right in my paven
your grandeur was glorious
my behaivour was unsteady
and right in your heart
i knew you thought i was 'notorious'
you lookedgorgious in
your beautiful attire
Iknew not what to say
and i couldn't retire
you walked close
to me and for my name
Iwas suprised because you
cared less about fame
I mumbled out Ga-bri-el
and you said yours was Mabel
.....watch out for the concluding part.
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