The Beautiful Ocean

Before we begin,
I want to take you on a wonderful journey.
So close your eyes,
And let me take you on a wonderful journey.

As we walking from your car,
While the sun is at high,
You felt some sand beneath your feet.
And your toes are sunk into the sandy beaches
Of this journey.

While the toes of your feet are sandy,
You felt some water on your feet and legs.

“The beautiful ocean,’ you say.
“What a beautiful sound of the water;
What a beautiful sight from the reflection of the sun;
What a beautiful touch of the cold water
The beautiful ocean.”

As we continue on this journey,
Some thoughts came through
And becoming more frequent than before.


“The beautiful ocean,” you say again.
“What a beautiful way to release some thoughts of emotions;
What a beautiful way to release some moments of life;
What a beautiful way to release some love from the heart.
The beautiful ocean.”

As the journey comes to an end,
And as we are walking to your car,
You looked behind you and said,

“The beautiful ocean,
It’s the ocean that makes it feel so good
That isn’t coming from the outside,
But is from the inside also.
The beautiful ocean.”

Now,
You may lift your eyes
And I’ve just took you to
The beautiful ocean.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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