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The Beautiful Mind

a beast of a brain

                        bucking away

                    dapple grey matter





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Aniruddha Pathak

September 17, 2018 at 6:17 AM

A lovely insight on mind and a good senryu

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 17, 2018 at 7:36 AM

Thank you my friend xomo

Tania Kitchin

September 11, 2018 at 5:37 PM

Great senryu, mind blowing!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 11, 2018 at 7:52 PM

Thank you!!! :) xomo!

Chris Green

September 11, 2018 at 4:10 PM

Never underestimate those little grey cells. Nice one my friend.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 11, 2018 at 7:53 PM

No kiddin' ;) thank you Chris! xomo <3

Connie Marcum Wong

September 11, 2018 at 3:06 PM

I can't imagine the pain for a poet to lose the loss of words. Brilliant Mo! : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 11, 2018 at 7:53 PM

Thank you Connie :) xomo!

Tim Smith

September 11, 2018 at 2:14 PM

At least shes still kicking...a beautiful bronc she is

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 11, 2018 at 7:54 PM

Amen to that <3

Winged Warrior

September 11, 2018 at 12:59 PM

...and a beautiful mind you have my friend...great senryu Mo...love & light...^WW^

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 11, 2018 at 7:55 PM

Thank you my friend :) xomo!

Rhona Mcferran

September 11, 2018 at 9:32 AM

I love this imagery... the idea of trying to bring the mind under control- struggling to "rein it in"... Great poem, Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 11, 2018 at 10:08 AM

The taming of the shire ;) you got it! Thank you Rhona, xomo!

Silent One

September 11, 2018 at 6:47 AM

That is the mind for you.. Ive lost many things in my life, but the thing i miss the most is my mind...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 11, 2018 at 7:29 AM

I have to agree with you there ;) xomo

Kim Rodrigues

September 10, 2018 at 8:45 PM

Great image!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 10, 2018 at 9:18 PM

Thank you! :)) xomo!

Charmaine Chircop

September 10, 2018 at 5:13 PM

Love this senryu ...Its all about our minds...how its wired in the moment...Will it rain or will it shine? :)..Loved this dear

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 10, 2018 at 9:17 PM

Working on rewiring myself ;) maybe not weather but climate control <3 xomo!

Susan Ashley

September 10, 2018 at 2:28 PM

Oh, how I love this, Maureen! Your dappled grey matter bucks the 'boring' and brings 'creatively awesome' for an artistic ride.. :)) There's brainy beauty in that beast! Perfect title too.. Warmest wishes always my lovely <3 ~Susan

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 10, 2018 at 3:50 PM

Thank you Lovely! xomo <3