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The Beautiful Mind

a beast of a brain bucking away dapple grey matter ***

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Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 9/17/2018 6:17:00 AM

A lovely insight on mind and a good senryu

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/17/2018 7:36:00 AM

Thank you my friend xomo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/11/2018 5:37:00 PM

Great senryu, mind blowing!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/11/2018 7:52:00 PM

Thank you!!! :) xomo!

Chris Green

Date: 9/11/2018 4:10:00 PM

Never underestimate those little grey cells. Nice one my friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/11/2018 7:53:00 PM

No kiddin' ;) thank you Chris! xomo <3

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/11/2018 3:06:00 PM

I can't imagine the pain for a poet to lose the loss of words. Brilliant Mo! : )

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/11/2018 7:53:00 PM

Thank you Connie :) xomo!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/11/2018 2:14:00 PM

At least shes still kicking...a beautiful bronc she is

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/11/2018 7:54:00 PM

Amen to that <3

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/11/2018 12:59:00 PM

...and a beautiful mind you have my friend...great senryu Mo...love & light...^WW^

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/11/2018 7:55:00 PM

Thank you my friend :) xomo!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 9/11/2018 9:32:00 AM

I love this imagery... the idea of trying to bring the mind under control- struggling to "rein it in"... Great poem, Maureen!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/11/2018 10:08:00 AM

The taming of the shire ;) you got it! Thank you Rhona, xomo!

Silent One

Date: 9/11/2018 6:47:00 AM

That is the mind for you.. Ive lost many things in my life, but the thing i miss the most is my mind...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/11/2018 7:29:00 AM

I have to agree with you there ;) xomo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/10/2018 8:45:00 PM

Great image!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/10/2018 9:18:00 PM

Thank you! :)) xomo!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/10/2018 5:13:00 PM

Love this senryu ...Its all about our minds...how its wired in the moment...Will it rain or will it shine? :)..Loved this dear

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/10/2018 9:17:00 PM

Working on rewiring myself ;) maybe not weather but climate control <3 xomo!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/10/2018 2:28:00 PM

Oh, how I love this, Maureen! Your dappled grey matter bucks the 'boring' and brings 'creatively awesome' for an artistic ride.. :)) There's brainy beauty in that beast! Perfect title too.. Warmest wishes always my lovely <3 ~Susan

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/10/2018 3:50:00 PM

Thank you Lovely! xomo <3

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/10/2018 1:15:00 PM

but the bucking dapple grey beast does not mind very well (nor often)! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/10/2018 1:30:00 PM

Yeehaw! ;) xomo!

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/10/2018 12:21:00 PM

Very interesting, Maureen!! I see lots of energy! Happy Monday xxoo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/10/2018 1:34:00 PM

Bit of a blur? ;) happy day to you! xomo

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/10/2018 12:10:00 PM

Thought provoking senryu... I enjoyed it, Maureen...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/10/2018 1:35:00 PM

Delighted thank you! xomo :)