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08/16/2026
The Beautiful Impossible
Second Place
Contest by Sotto Poet.
The Beautiful Impossible
Fish always keeps its eyes open
Obvious : All its cards are shown.
Staying in quiet silent mood
Neither to protest nor be rude.
Destined to be killed not to fight
Bound to surrender : Is that rIght ?
Eyes open ! Everything hostile.
With canopy of leaves tree stands
swaying branches on stream strand.
Withered leaves leave Mother tree.
Detached leaves fall on stream, as free !
Helpless ! Little brittle ripples
cradle with much care : So simple
in normal, natural life - style.
First love was completely shattered
All dreamy desires are scattered.
Swam and sank in deep despondency :
Endured failure, conspiracy.
I demanded freedom from him.
He walked away suppressing scream.
He turned inert closing love - file.
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