The Beautiful Dove

Now i lay here whole again
Cleansed away of all my sins
Wishing to see her one more time
But in my heart it feels like a crime
To be in the presence of a beautiful girl
It just throws my head into a whirl
Wondering just how this could be
The relationship of this girl and me
I think about her night and day
Just wishing that there was more to say
We walked away wishing for more time
But the more we talk the further we climb
Once again my heart is whole
and its thank to this beautiful soul
We get closer and we cause pain
But together we will walk through the flames
Every time i see her it brings joy to my heart
Just wishing that we would never part
In my heart she will always stay
Until it comes to the ending day
The more we talk and the more we bet
The closer and closer that we both get
Wither her i leave my undying love
To see once again that beautiful dove

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/17/2010 12:10:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Jamie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2010 8:32:00 PM
very good poem
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