The Bearer of Bad News

So eloquently
I delivered the bad news
She really cried 

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 15, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Do you see that you are making judgements? the person was eloquent, the news was bad...do you see you could not take a snapshot of this.. [above you have sentence broken into 5/7/5] ..with this one I don't think we can work with it..perhaps as a senryu which is about humanity we could ..not really haiku material whose focus is nature and seasonal
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