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The Beach and Me

tug-o-war of sand
   underneath frothing footprints —
          swashbuckles the sea

8/2/2021
Haiku Challenge
Regina McIntosh

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JC Brul

August 6, 2021 at 3:01 AM

so beautiful!!!! Congratulations dear Kim..

Kim Rodrigues

August 6, 2021 at 3:13 AM

Thank you, sweet poet!

Kim Merryman

August 5, 2021 at 5:42 PM

Kim, love the creative imagery! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Kim Rodrigues

August 5, 2021 at 5:58 PM

Thank you, Kim!

Jan Allison

August 5, 2021 at 12:28 PM

Lovely imagery Kim, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

August 5, 2021 at 1:42 PM

Thank you, Jan!

John Lawless

August 4, 2021 at 3:26 PM

The earth moving under one's feet....always an interesting experience. nicely done Kim

Kim Rodrigues

August 5, 2021 at 3:44 AM

Thank you, John!

Paula Goldsmith

August 4, 2021 at 3:21 PM

Congratulations on your win. "THE BEACH AND ME" is a wonderful story/write in just a few words. "Love it" and the picture. Have a great/blessed day..................

Kim Rodrigues

August 5, 2021 at 3:44 AM

Thank you, Paula! Blessings to you too!