The Battle Rages

Clashing, flashing arrows; Bolts pierce the cotton ball clouds; thunder booms. Another rainstorm visits and all lives, run for cover; in fear. Old man, cloudburst, has a temper tantrum.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/9/2018 2:57:00 PM
We have had the strangest thunder storms here this summer. There will be thunder rolling for hours but no rain nor any lightning seen. It has happed about 6 times this summer. I am thinking that someone below is getting a down pour at least I hope someone is benefitting from all that noise and the dogs being in fear. Sara
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/11/2018 7:30:00 AM
I think the downpour was in my town; we were deluged with 5" of rain here Sat and Sun and in the mountain areas; one guy drowned in his taxi because he couldn't get out before the street flooded. We had it all, wind, rain and lightening and even lost a couple of tv channels. Glad it's over though. Thanks for dropping by.
Date: 9/5/2018 6:48:00 AM
Very vivid imagery ..You captured the sights and sounds..well done, M.L.K.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/5/2018 8:33:00 PM
Thank you Vijay.
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