The Bar Is Closed Down Now

Both rushing
Me from the north
You from the south
The wrong way round.
Shorts. Tee shirt
A bottle of beer.
You arrived in a state
After a day’s work hauling 
Your bag through the Tube.
You’re glowing I said.
Sweating you said, embarrassed. 
A virtual hug into a real one?
Are you kidding you said?
No I said. Then yes! You said
The bar in Euston?
See you there!
Sitting close, the brush of a leg
No kissing though
We might be seen
That look that shake of a head
I think I’m falling in love. 
I’m not a million miles from that. 
Faces so open. Flushed.
Surprised? Awe? Love? The heat?
Just happy. Unencumbered.
Joy. Pure. Writ large and open.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 7:08 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Goff Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Your last 2 lines, Jane, a place the reader (me!) understands, you have written quite original....'Faces so open. Flushed.' Perfect! jim
Fleming Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Nicely penned, Jane, nicely penned. Cheers! :) john P.s Worthy of a seven!
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