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The Bar Is Closed Down Now

Both rushing Me from the north You from the south The wrong way round. Shorts. Tee shirt A bottle of beer. You arrived in a state After a day’s work hauling Your bag through the Tube. You’re glowing I said. Sweating you said, embarrassed. A virtual hug into a real one? Are you kidding you said? No I said. Then yes! You said The bar in Euston? See you there! Sitting close, the brush of a leg No kissing though We might be seen That look that shake of a head I think I’m falling in love. I’m not a million miles from that. Faces so open. Flushed. Surprised? Awe? Love? The heat? Just happy. Unencumbered. Joy. Pure. Writ large and open.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/19/2025 7:08:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/19/2016 8:27:00 PM
Your last 2 lines, Jane, a place the reader (me!) understands, you have written quite original....'Faces so open. Flushed.' Perfect! jim
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Date: 8/22/2016 3:03:00 PM
Nicely penned, Jane, nicely penned. Cheers! :) john P.s Worthy of a seven!
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