The Banking Rate

The banking rate 
is like a young lady
one day low and promising
next day
the value rises with several per cent
and a question 
at the dance floor 
by the river will be  
can I get a loan?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 9:58 AM
loved it!
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 5:55 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today Haldor. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Nutter Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 3:21 AM
The never ending apprehensive question. Nice write and read.
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