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For 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 26 Poetry Contest sponsored by Mark Toney

The Balloon

Balloon, balloon, so high in the air,
Its destination I know not where, 
Its point of departure, that is too 
A mystery in the sky of blue. 

I too wonder, wonder, why oh why
This bright drifter was allowed to fly 
As it left to float in the air so high, 
Did a two year old begin to cry? 

I must, I must ask the question “who?”
Is the boy or girl whose age is two?
Did her grandma say, “this is for you”, 
Giving it not to the sky so blue?

A puzzle, a puzzle, too, is how
This nomad came to where it is now. 
Did playful winds blow it over this town,  
While silly gravity went upside down?

What about, what about, what about when 
Did this wayward orb’s fun journey begin -
Way back in Egypt by a pyramid 
When Cleopatra was just a kid?

Maybe, maybe it had cargo, but what?
A note or resident of Lilliput?
Oops, by Gosh, it did just disappear,
And my thoughts did too - with a pop, I fear!
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Edmonds  Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 6:17 PM
Wow! David, your balloon poem is so creative. Who can tell where a balloon has come from, or if they fly into Kingdom come. Maybe they drift round and round the sky up high, until they pop, wither and die. Truly an enjoyable read… Beryl
Crandall Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 9:44 PM
Thanks Beryl - I'm glad you liked it. I was hoping you would since you have such a nice balloon poem!
Rose  Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 6:15 PM
a very interesting poem, I greatly appreciate your creativity.
Crandall Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 9:17 PM
Thanks for the kind words Rose!
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