The Ball - Contest

That looks like a picture of the maldives. This is a very deeply moving poem, and i loved the way you’ve delivered it in such a creative and soulful manner, “ Bog” a word im not familiar with, although we use it not in a very pleasant way. However that last line says it all, sometimes we feel that emptiness despite the ups and lows. Hits strong. Best wishes for the contest. Pleasure always reading