The Bait

I recently visited cedar point
Its such a lovely,carefree joint
I lost a pink flower
My sis dropped a dollar
But we were all fine in the end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dray Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 3:29 PM
what do you mean by bait? is there some sort of pun invovled
Goff Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 2:28 PM
am also enjoying your take on your work!! great poem again! Willow!! jim
Guzzi Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 6:26 AM
sweet and simple the way life's when it's easy!Thank you for your kind comments. Light & Love
Dray Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 6:47 PM
another great poem has eeked its way from your heart to the box in wich you write it in bravo!
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