The Bag O Candy

There’s a bag of candy in my kitchen drawer.
It’s hidden THERE, in the candy drawer?
In the drawer THERE (point, point)
The licorice bits are in a bag.
A special bag ZIP LOCKED.
THERE (point, point) with the old refrigerator magnets.
THERE, with the unused toaster oven tray.
Refuse in a drawer, to good to discard.
Residents of the drawer hold back the tide;
hold messages from the Dali Lama.
Hold toast on a tray.
But, the dern refuse drawer’s not keeping me away!

the blue track of THE bag
	peeks out of the drawer
		
I just can’t refuse it!
I WANT SOME MORE!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/4/2009 3:02:00 AM
LOL Very funny and so very true! I have chocolate in the 'baking' cupboard, along with flour, icing sugar and such. It's cooking chocolate which I know doesn't taste great, but I know it’s there all of the time. It whispers to me whenever I'm near, and sometimes when I'm not! I cannot tell you how many times I have eaten that darn rubbish tasting chocolate!
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Date: 4/28/2009 9:36:00 AM
Hmmmm...I had a drawer like yours, Deborah, then I had to make it into a game of 'hide and seek'. I'm sure the kids had a Goodie Radar implanted at some time or another.:) If they couldn't find it, then it was a sure thing I'd forget where the new treasure hold was.:( I enjoyed this write, I can't stop smiling!!:) Best to you...God bless you and yours...Love, Mikki
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Date: 4/26/2009 6:56:00 PM
HAHAHA! Candy!!!! I want some. Keep puttin a smile on my face, thank you Deborah. For everything. Love Sami.
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Date: 4/26/2009 2:28:00 PM
Got my smile for the day! Thank you Deborah! ~Trudy~
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Date: 4/24/2009 5:27:00 AM
Deborah,..I like this,..it reminds me of old habits I no longer have! hmm*smiles* james
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Date: 4/23/2009 4:00:00 PM
i take the caps are representitive of your cravings talking. tell me if it's so. John H Loving III
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Date: 4/23/2009 1:30:00 PM
Well done Debbie! (brolly - umbrella, and lolly - money) A most entertaing piece! Love and hugs, Keith
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Date: 4/23/2009 1:12:00 PM
I have chocolate fudge filled Easter eggs in my freezer. Thinking I would not bother to wait to defrost when my craving hits, so, I end up eating them frozen. Never thought they would taste even better! I'm so weak, and I'm beginning not to care! Life is short. Enjoy! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/23/2009 7:32:00 AM
Sobodys really loves candy. Good write Deborah
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Date: 4/23/2009 7:26:00 AM
Temptation and a Sweet tooth... not a good combination. LOL! My weakness... chocolate and I now, thanks to your poem, hear it calling my name. Great writing Deborah. Have a great day! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/23/2009 7:07:00 AM
ME TOO!!!!! Temptation....calls my name...! I have found the only thing that saves me from myself, is if I throw "whatever" leftover goodies over the back fence to the cows. (I wonder if cows like licorice??)
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