The Awakening

It's the space where I can breathe
ascending mountains yonder
A green expanse where souls can feed
and be filled with all God's wonder

Soft white clouds caress my face
as I soar through winds around me
All shades beneath blend and embrace
the speed of light can move me

So here I am..I'm heading where..
across a plane unknown
I turn and dive beyond my fear
a bird set free to go

gone past the day towards the night
I sail towards a star
No..too much darkness..I'm filled with fright
The star..it's distant..far

I cannot fly beyond this zone
I'm such a little light in all this vastness
Where is my God... I'm scared... I'm all alone
Lord pull me out of this darkness

With utmost speed I'm being drawn
I see this planet Earth
A sudden landing from where I'd been torn
inside here since my birth

I'll venture out again...I will..
Indescribable that high
Ecstatic..Free..Where time stands still
Where I'm part of wind and sky

Now consciously for God I look
to answer what I saw
As cautiously I read the Book
he leaves an open door

But darkness makes me feel I'm wise..
convinces me I'm weak 
He shuts my ears and blinds my eyes
while I earthly pleasures seek

He plots the ways for me to die
He vows I'll never see
He turns the truth into a lie
that God is in Christ in me

How is it that I'm pulled out
of this deep and frightening hole
A sinner who has learned about 
salvation for my soul

Unworthy as I lived in strife
yet now an example of reform
that all may know what is that Life
that bonds Love and Light..transformed

Now no more held but taking hold
refusing to be captive
For inside of me is strength untold
no more to leave inactive

So get behind adversary
and tempt me not with sin
Great is the love that set me free
for whom I'll fight and win...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/1/2012 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Obe's" contest Diana. Love, Carol
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 5/1/2012 3:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Carol...I appreciate it...Love Diana
Date: 4/29/2012 4:57:00 AM
Hi congrats on your win, sorry this is a cut and paste congrats, I am on my hols with limited connectHi ionXX
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/29/2012 11:28:00 AM
(smile)...Thank you Mandy... Enjoy the hols... Love Diana
Date: 4/27/2012 9:39:00 PM
Very cool :)
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/28/2012 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Timmie for your view and comment (smile)... Love Diana
Date: 4/27/2012 6:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win Diana///Love ...Joseph
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/28/2012 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Joseph... Love Diana
Date: 4/27/2012 5:50:00 PM
We are all children of the creator [even the devil ;)] there would be no good without evil all play their part. Congrad's on this fine write winning. Light & Love
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/28/2012 1:46:00 PM
Thank you very much Debbie... Love Diana
Date: 4/13/2012 4:28:00 PM
I'm going to be sending you a soup mail :o)
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/27/2012 1:05:00 PM
Thank you Dan... Love Diana
Date: 4/12/2012 8:41:00 PM
A very nice imaginary expressed story poem, nice rhyme and flow,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/27/2012 1:07:00 PM
Thanks Erich... I'm glad you enjoyed it!!!... Love Diana
Date: 4/12/2012 7:42:00 PM
great rhming an flowing verse.... inspiring poetry....you are good!
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/27/2012 1:08:00 PM
( Laugh!!) You too Don!! Thanks... Love Diana
Date: 4/12/2012 7:12:00 PM
Outstanding write.This one is going to stick to me.Thank you.
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/27/2012 1:09:00 PM
Most kind of you Elliott.. Thank you... Love Diana
Date: 4/12/2012 6:02:00 PM
Great, I really like it!
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Date: 4/27/2012 1:10:00 PM
I'm glad Lisa!! Also, I like your work!!... Love Diana
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