The Autumn On the Threshold

frantic talent
among willow  shadows
capsized boats
in trawls meshes
the spiders spinning brocades

lights at the window
someone waiting for us
an ardent desire floating in the air
set free
the moon soal wandering

a cock
sifting the stars with kikeriki
in the lake full of waterlilies
waves of silvery clouds putting out the night lantern
slowly the dawn caressing the forehead

under the feather sole
bridges lines
can be seen
far away beings coming nearer through
their hearts accord strikes

contrasts
deepening disappearing
in a continuous back and forth
a wind shaking the white chrysanthemums
the cottages hats appearing from the fog

though it is hot
autumn stitch
shaking the nut trees
the fisherman’s wife is alone
all over baked apples steam

unhealed wounds
weeps towards the murky sky
at the poor’s gate
there is an icons painter
getting a bowl of food

with the love colours
the trees and sky are painted
my friend
I give you a tear
of its light



( translated by Margareta Mioc)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/5/2024 1:46:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:22:00 AM
Anisoara Iordache, AWESOME POEM...LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:57:00 PM
Anisoara, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ..............love SKAT
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Date: 11/26/2014 3:47:00 PM
each one of these stanzas could stand alone but as a string of poems it is stunning! a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/26/2014 1:47:00 PM
To say the least...Enchanting!!! Great poem with some great lines...loved it!!! P.s more of the same please. :) john.
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