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The Australian Sun

One step at a time Count them or make a rhyme Then fix your gaze to the front And walk to it taking the brunt Of the exercise in the walk Breath in and hear magpies squawk The Australian sun is something to behold Being in nature never gets at all old. © Paul Warren Poetry

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Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 9/1/2017 8:24:00 AM

Lovely and vivid, yes so true. I've been to Sydney and Queensland, and the sunset is really something over there. Great writing.

Paul Warren
Date: 9/1/2017 8:44:00 PM

Thankyou for reading and commenting on my poem

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 8/31/2017 4:36:00 AM

Sweet bird of youth still flying in Oz: You are a poet wizard building mythologial verses as possible rituals of joy of life and wonderful this Australian Sun and lovely people... biting the fire with green branches (to stop forest fire)-an unforgettable image as I remember from Patrick White. Wonderful playful rhymes rhyming times.At first I think you Crocodile Dandle, then this poem-toy to fondle and dandle, And playfully handle ...

Paul Warren
Date: 9/1/2017 8:42:00 PM

Thankyou for reading and commenting on my poem