The Auction

going once 
going twice
i wince at the
thought of my future 
being gone
i look around 
and ignore the rich  
in the room
lifting up my right hand
to bid all i have left
silently pledging
with my dreams 
my joy
my heart and
my hunger
to remain diligent 
never ignoring
possibilities
with teary eyes 
i stare and stand
my right hand still 
lifted high 
feeling like
another number in the
crowd fighting for my life
i cant help but notice 
the silence in the room as i 
plea for another chance
i look to the left 
of me
no one is standing
i look to the right of me
no one is standing
i look in front of me
my future looking bright
and appreciative of my pledge 
then "SOLD" is what he said
to the woman who believes
i still have my future

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/2/2012 11:43:00 AM
Tania, the future is in front of you - take it....you are the best...!!! - Love your poem, well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Tania Gainous
Date: 7/2/2012 11:59:00 AM
thank you!:) im encouraged!!
Date: 7/2/2012 10:52:00 AM
OOOOOOO wooooow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Somebody please let out the red carpet for this lady!! OMG..THIS is beyond amazing..love this love this love this love this and LOVE THIS!!! fav!!
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Tania Gainous
Date: 7/2/2012 11:59:00 AM
awww..pace..:) thank you..
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Date: 7/2/2012 11:09:00 AM
Ok..I do apologize..I got a bit over excited..This is a very creative write Tania..I love how you started and finished..The flow was excellent and it was entertaining at the same time with a message so POWERFUL!!..KEEP YOUR PEN STEADY!!! sweetheart!! huggs
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