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The Attempt

Sirens blaring Lights flashing Machines beeping All around Doctors trying To save me from dying And finding a home In the ground Family crying Friends praying Everybody Asking why. Heart stops beating I stop breathing The time has come For me to die. Doctors working Family screaming I slowly open Up my eyes. My life is saved I'm not in the grave Happy tears flow From my family's eyes. Death is weeping I am sleeping I've lived to see another day. I am crying Still feel like dying It shouldn't have to Be this way.

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Date: 9/15/2021 12:52:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this in your poetic style. May you find hope in the Lord Who saves, and grants life eternal, according to John 3:16 of the Bible: "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Welcome to PS. God bless you.
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