The Astonishing Serenity of Eventide

A kaleidoscope of azure and intense tangerine, resonating beauty so peaceful and serene- My eyes are raptured from the sun descending, the most astonishing sight I’ve ever seen. Soon the ebon sky shall arrive with dusk ascending. Breathtaking and elegant I see nothing but appeal, there are no metaphors to describe just how I feel- With each blink of my eye the scenery modifies, and with each transformation my heart does heal, bringing resplendency to life with the closing of the skies. Peach sapphire radiancy with staggering desire, a long day of sunshine turns into eventide fire- The day is concluded with heaven’s sweet abyss, twilight approaches as tranquility I do acquire. I watch the stillness appear as the intimate clouds kiss. No sights can be seen with this much placid repose, it’s time for rest for the weary as daylight comes to close- Soon dawn will arrive with a new artisan hue, and all things mother nature brings in marvel shall expose. Now it’s time to bid farewell and say with awe... adieu. February 15, 2018

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Date: 4/9/2018 2:39:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Laura.
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Date: 3/15/2018 5:00:00 AM
Such wondrous verses my friend. Spirit, color, flow and inspiration in this gem awe me.... A fav.....
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Date: 3/12/2018 11:01:00 PM
Very pretty Laura, painted well with words;-)
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Date: 3/6/2018 12:04:00 PM
Hello Laura,you have written a beautiful poem. Also the picture scene is breath taking. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:18:00 PM
Whatever contest you won, congrats! I can not verbalize like Susan and others that understand poetically what you're accomplishing...I am in awe of the icing you whip up with words. Beautiful. bbn
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Date: 2/19/2018 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your fine with with a beautifully flowing poem.
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:21:00 AM
many thanks sweet Subimal :)-luloo
Date: 2/18/2018 6:24:00 PM
Beautifully written, Laura! Congrats on your First Place win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:20:00 AM
thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 2/18/2018 4:33:00 PM
Your beautiful poem illustrates the serenity and tranquility of sunset with lush imagery in graceful lines of rhythm and excellent rhymes. Congratulations Laura on your wonderful first place win! ~Susan
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:20:00 AM
thank you sweet Susan :)-luloo
Date: 2/18/2018 4:15:00 PM
Excellent and elegant lines, all so very expressive and stunning, Laura Loo! Congrats on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:20:00 AM
thank you sweet Laura :)-luloo
Date: 2/18/2018 12:15:00 PM
- Big Congratulations, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:20:00 AM
thank you again! :)-luloo
Date: 2/18/2018 11:56:00 AM
So many amazing lines in this, I do not know where to start.. congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:20:00 AM
aww thanks dear Silent One :)-lulooo
Date: 2/18/2018 9:55:00 AM
Lovely LuLoo, congratulations...
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:19:00 AM
thank you dear Charlie :)-luloo
Date: 2/18/2018 9:31:00 AM
Indeed awesome. Spectacular imagery. Well done, Laura.
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:19:00 AM
many thanks dear Line :)-luloo
Date: 2/18/2018 9:20:00 AM
Just breathtaking and such exquisite imagery and rhyme, Luloo - love this piece and I must fave, (and it has inspired me this glorious Sunday morning) ... blessings and congrats, Dear Poet Friend! :-) <3
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:19:00 AM
awww thank you! :)-luloo
Date: 2/15/2018 12:17:00 PM
- Beautifully described with feelings that make me a little sad ... maybe because I do not like to say goodbye - Best wishes in the contest, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:19:00 AM
thank you sweet Sunshine :)-luloo
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