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The Arrow's Moment

a motionless buck frozen in the arrow's moment .....rose blood on the snow John G. Lawless ©11/23/2022

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Date: 11/30/2022 9:36:00 AM
Dear John, your poetical expression captures the this moment between breaths with finesse. Vivid, vibrant yet sad (from my perspective), your imagery is stunning. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/23/2022 7:14:00 PM
Too real for me... Nice job, John.
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Date: 11/23/2022 1:30:00 PM
so sad but perfectly and poetically described, john...
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