The Arrow's Moment

a motionless buck
frozen in the arrow's moment
                                      .....rose blood on the snow

John G. Lawless
©11/23/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ashley Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:36 AM
Dear John, your poetical expression captures the this moment between breaths with finesse. Vivid, vibrant yet sad (from my perspective), your imagery is stunning. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 7:14 PM
Too real for me... Nice job, John.
Bauer Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 1:30 PM
so sad but perfectly and poetically described, john...
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