The Arduous Journey

I was wandering barefoot in the snow
What a journey I had to sow

I knew this wasn’t something I would normal indulge in
A strange kind of winter walk without a coat in the wind 

But I continued my lonely trudging anyway
The skies where a dire dark gray

Somehow although it felt cold it didn’t feel wet or unbearable
Perhaps this was the end? Some kind of parable

I was somewhere I didn’t want to roam
My mission was clearly to find my way home

Every passageway I strove to push through came up empty
This was not the happy land of plenty

Why couldn’t I find the end?
Was there some impending trickery around the bend? 


I felt a strong frustration descend over me
I saw the strange face of an unknown banshee

Screams and tears plumed out of loss and shame
I was repeatedly calling out my husband’s name 

Distorted, destroyed no one spoke 
Thank God it ended I woke 
 




Inspired by the “I dreamed contest”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 8:47 PM
Yes those kind of dreams are our nightmares. Congrats on your win, Laura. Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Congrats for well penned poem
Villarosa Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 12:04 AM
Congratulations Laura on your winning this contest. Well deserved one. (^_^) Noel
Richards Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 10:51 AM
A disturbing, yet real dream I can imagine. How strange are dreams, that take a loss, and turn it into some unspoken and terrifying form ... to disturb the peace of mind. I'm glad you woke!! Congratulations on a thoughtful, yet real take on "dreaming". Love Carrie (ps...and thank you so much for your on-going support...it means a lot to me:) !!
White Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 3:37 AM
Jolting dream here- Congrats Laura
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 8:21 PM
Congrats Laura on your HM in the I Dreamed contest.. a most wonderful honor for u to so enjoy for an excellent write... thankxxx for your blog comment too..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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March 18, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Good use of rhyme to share this nightmare. I bet you were glad to waken. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Anderson Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 11:10 AM
Hey Laura, Thanks for leaving your kind comments on my piece...I wish you luck in the contest! I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf....Jimmy
Chircop Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Tnk God you woke from that bad dream..dreams can be so confusing,many times,Wonderful entry to the contest..enjoyed--Charma
Culverhouse Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 12:57 PM
sounds confusing, i have alot of dreams like that just all jumbled up nonsense.
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