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The Ardent Rose

While holding frail roses close to the breast,
I think of a dawn, so perfect and fair,
ardent with sunlight and warm on the crest

I watched from the window, you were recessed,
deep in thorn bushes, gold in your hair,
while holding frail roses close to the breast

You seemed like a child, barefoot, at best,
pulling a weed, as the breeze stirred the air,
ardent with sunlight and warm on the crest

You looked to the sky, your thoughts off somewhere,
as if you knew time was fragile, at best, 
while holding frail roses close to the breast

I think you knew then, how moments, compressed
must fade like the rose, when autumn prepares,
ardent with sunlight and warm on the crest

I've learned through the years, how timeless and blessed
are keepsakes we hold, like roses, once pressed,
while holding frail roses close to my breast,
ardent with sunlight, and warm on the crest

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6/15/16
Inspired by Contest: Villanelle Me A Flower or Flowers
Entered in Contest: Early June Premiere Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Way to go with this winning work..Congrats on your fine win..Sara
Smith Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Lovely and deserving of honors Carrie. Well done...
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 4:03 PM
- This melt all hearts, beautiful poem Carrie - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Richards Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Thank you so much !! You've made me smile !!
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