The Arabian Sea At Sunset

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waves ignore call of the gulls, tides ebb and flow, sweep asunder blowing wind, make setting Sun glow. boats scamper to shore, their masts ruffle in protest, sea of dreams and lore! written 27/06/2021 Sequidilla Poetry contest William Kekaula sponsored 7 lines with 7575575 syllables with abcb ded rhyme

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/27/2021 8:58:00 PM

Ah, yes: 'sea of dreams and lore.' That's a bullseye, Krish! Cheers, Gershon

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/27/2021 9:15:00 PM

Thanks Gershon! Arabian Sea and the Arabian Nights!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/27/2021 7:23:00 PM

Krish, I loved your poem about the Arabian Sea. I love maritime poems. This one flowed so nicely. Well-written...and best wishes in William's contest.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/27/2021 9:15:00 PM

Thanks Milton! Good good to hear from you, my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/27/2021 3:22:00 PM

Those to items sea and dreams go together like peanut butter and jam, lol, beautiful poetry Krish

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/27/2021 9:14:00 PM

Thanks Mystic! I have stood on the shores for hours hearing and watching the waves!:)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/27/2021 2:17:00 PM

A lovely write. I enjoyed and wish you a win. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/27/2021 2:25:00 PM

Thanks Gina! Hope it meets Williams expectations!