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The Apostles

(3/9/12) Different directions the apostles had traveled Most of life’s questions - CHRIST had unraveled. They had questions and doubts as many do But what they saw in CHRIST They knew his words were true. So many miracles that they had seen But their faith was always tested in between. They fell asleep when CHRIST went to the Mountaintop to pray- they couldn’t keep Their eyes open- what could they say. When CHRIST fell asleep in the boat And the winds and rain began Fear entered their hearts and they Woke CHRIST for his helping hand. The lord questioned their faith As he raised his hands to the sky As the winds and rains did subside. The biggest tests were yet to come After the last supper was done. Betrayal, denial , and crucifixion Was in motion - to find out each One's devotion. He predicted that Judas would betray him And peter would deny him three times And for him the end of the line. Now we all know that this was GODS plan That the apostles will preach throughout the lands They would create Christianity, and it would live Through eternity. © L.Rams

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Date: 6/8/2012 2:14:00 PM
nice write,Louis,nice journey
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Date: 3/11/2012 6:50:00 PM
I like your poem. Good subject. I have a couple of punctuation points in this: Ones devotion. [Show possessive - One's devotion] He predicted that Judas would betray him And peter would deny him three times And for him the end of the line. Now we all know that this was gods plan [Capitalize God's]
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Date: 3/12/2012 9:45:00 AM
james thank you for the tweak i corrected both.

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