The Answers

When I think about the way I live.
The way people take all I can give.
They gather all around me now.
They can't feel the love,forgot,somehow.

Their empty eyes and cold dark hearts
save all their worth in shopping carts.
Disconnected by a cold dull knife.
Pain and loneliness seem their way of life.

The open signs that they disdain
attest to where their hearts have lain.
Creating chaos,feeling no shame.
Always looking for someone else to blame.

If they stay on this path then satans won.
Their clouded minds think God is gone.
They must wake up it's not to late.
It's not just a cruel twist of fate.

You may ignore,you may deny.
But deep inside,you want to cry.
You look elsewhere to be fulfilled.
But the answers lie inside you still.

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Date: 4/29/2009 11:53:00 AM
beautiful written, I am so happy you commented on my poem stop as now I can read your poems too its great t read faith poes to help us be encouraged and gain even more strength, welcome to soup and you will soon have many friends in writing, God bless you from diane
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Date: 4/23/2009 3:02:00 AM
This is wonderful. We all need God in our lives. Keep writing. Always, Dane
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Date: 4/22/2009 1:23:00 PM
Oh wow amazing write... You are very good.. Welcome to Poetrysoup i invite you to read my poems. -Elizabeth
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