The Answere

i have these 
dark thoughts 
about killing 
myself and i try
alot to do 
so but it never 
works 
besides who miss me?
im just an ugly person
who has no life 
at all
to me suicid is the answere
to all my problems
and i dont think many people would
care if i died 
the way people treat me
its not worth
it any more 
iv tryed to deal
with it but i 
cant any 
its like the 
snow and the sun
the cant stand
each other
 so i might as
well go away 
and never com back 
since i wont be missed
so good bye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sessler Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 9:06 AM
i would care if you die
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 9:31 AM
this is a very good write i hope this one did not come from your own convictions, because that is not the answer but obviously your alive so......im babling. this poem portrays the thoughts of the suicidal very well and was very emotional. great piece. Jo
Pickett Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 8:16 AM
Very expressive write here... Keep up all the good work....:JP]
Palli Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 7:38 AM
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