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The Anonymous Angel Premiere Contest Winner

I don't know Who was it But it is definite I got the rainbow At a forgotten point of time It was placed A flower vase finely laced The vine leaves climb Very often in the sleep During the REM phase Shows up the lace The pink relief I wake up naturally with The water lily in my psych The morning I so much like The words of clarity and pith The glistening bone china Not just solo The aroma of aloe And the little myna I am sure some angel When I was a child With her hands lotus mild Had given the flowers of the apples It may be my mother Or someone else All my ice melts In the dream stir In the complex world The survival wouldn’t be possible Without the seagull From the gift impearled The decorated vessel Returns over and over Forever the lover A hundred boats sail The sail of affection the winds of love The clouds of fluff The rhododendrons ________________________ April 14, 2018 Anonymous Angels - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Yazmin Malik

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Date: 12/19/2018 9:15:00 AM
Well deserved your win Mr. Probir Beautiful poem.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 6/6/2018 9:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Probir. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
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Date: 6/10/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thank you, Artsie ...
Date: 5/9/2018 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win Probir. A great poem........Maria
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/9/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Maria ...
Date: 5/8/2018 11:19:00 AM
I am sorry, Probir, I read this poem before and I fail to leave a message.. great imagery . My favorite line,"With her hands lotus mild Had given the flowers of the apples" .. Big Congratulations on your win... Hugs dear friend
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/9/2018 8:19:00 AM
Sorry? ... Never ... You like whatever I write ... Are always inspiring ... I will never forget the pantoum lesson ... Thank you so much, Eve ...
Date: 5/8/2018 8:49:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Probir. Congratulations on your 1st Place Trophy win! Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/9/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra ...
Date: 5/7/2018 8:31:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/8/2018 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, Line ...
Date: 5/7/2018 6:21:00 PM
Oh my! Congratulations on your #1 win with this beautiful poem. Each verse with great imagery and rhyme. Absolutely a wonderful read.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/8/2018 8:18:00 AM
Thank you, Susan ...
Date: 5/7/2018 4:33:00 PM
Congrats on your trophy win. Angels everywhere,
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/8/2018 8:19:00 AM
Right ... Thanks ...
Date: 5/7/2018 4:30:00 PM
Congrats!!! on your win Probir...great read my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/8/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, WW ...
Date: 4/15/2018 4:43:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery Probir. Sounds like you have more than one angel looking after you.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/15/2018 7:52:00 PM
Ha ha ha ... the more the better ... Thank you, Jean ...

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