Premiere Contest WinnerThe Anonymous Angel

I don't know Who was it But it is definite I got the rainbow At a forgotten point of time It was placed A flower vase finely laced The vine leaves climb Very often in the sleep During the REM phase Shows up the lace The pink relief I wake up naturally with The water lily in my psych The morning I so much like The words of clarity and pith The glistening bone china Not just solo The aroma of aloe And the little myna I am sure some angel When I was a child With her hands lotus mild Had given the flowers of the apples It may be my mother Or someone else All my ice melts In the dream stir In the complex world The survival wouldn’t be possible Without the seagull From the gift impearled The decorated vessel Returns over and over Forever the lover A hundred boats sail The sail of affection the winds of love The clouds of fluff The rhododendrons ________________________ April 14, 2018 Anonymous Angels - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Yazmin Malik
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Shagun Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Well deserved your win Mr. Probir Beautiful poem.
Gupta Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Thank you so much ...
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June 6, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Congrats on your win. Probir. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
Gupta Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Thank you, Artsie ...
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win Probir. A great poem........Maria
Gupta Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:15 AM
Thank you so much, Maria ...
Roper Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 11:19 AM
I am sorry, Probir, I read this poem before and I fail to leave a message.. great imagery . My favorite line,"With her hands lotus mild Had given the flowers of the apples" .. Big Congratulations on your win... Hugs dear friend
Gupta Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Sorry? ... Never ... You like whatever I write ... Are always inspiring ... I will never forget the pantoum lesson ... Thank you so much, Eve ...
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Beautiful poem, Probir. Congratulations on your 1st Place Trophy win! Sandra
Gupta Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Thank you, Sandra ...
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May 7, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Congrats on your top win, Probir.
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May 8, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Thank you, Line ...
Gentry Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 6:21 PM
Oh my! Congratulations on your #1 win with this beautiful poem. Each verse with great imagery and rhyme. Absolutely a wonderful read.
Gupta Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 8:18 AM
Thank you, Susan ...
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May 7, 2018 at 4:33 PM
Congrats on your trophy win. Angels everywhere,
Gupta Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Right ... Thanks ...
Warrior Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Congrats!!! on your win Probir...great read my friend...love & light...^WW^
Gupta Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Thank you, WW ...
Murray Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Gorgeous imagery Probir. Sounds like you have more than one angel looking after you.
Gupta Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 7:52 PM
Ha ha ha ... the more the better ... Thank you, Jean ...
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