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The Angels Envy Our Love

As our eyes shut in darkest night. Angels envy our love for each other. Our smiling faces with closed eyes. Our sweet temporary farewells until we wake to say good morning. Angels swoon in romantic daydreams. That a love smaller than ours would grace them. That our embrace would fall into Storyland. Angels stand awake in envy watching closely at our very own love's melody.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/10/2016 12:41:00 PM
Allison, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/9/2010 2:17:00 PM
Angels are a favorite of mine Allison.. I collect them and they are in every room of my home.. your poem is lovely and full of romanticism as your form... appreciate the fav on my poem..check out the contests...one sure way of getting your poetry read and noticed more frequently..luv..
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Date: 9/9/2010 1:50:00 PM
our capacity to love is truly a gracious gift
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Date: 9/9/2010 1:38:00 PM
Very romantic..loved it..Take care~Deb
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