The Angel Star.

In the northern heavens her essence so vivid
My constant seraphic star
Basking within her gloriousness warming
Cleaves to me from distances far
Guiding my pathway on night lit Earth
Keeping my course right and true
Holding back storms until I reach my safe haven
To witness the next dawn rise anew
Those nights when cover clouds her features
Her radiance rushes in on the winds
Blessing my journey seeing me home safely
Forgiving my ways absolving my sins
Morning starts breaking and my cherub starts fading
Past the horizon waters falling so deep
Awaiting the rising of her mettle so tender
Of that maternal star light unique.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 7/8/2011 11:56:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Charles. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 11:30:00 AM
This is still one of my favorite poems written by you Charlie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2009 10:28:00 AM
I am reading my favorite poems today and just wanted to let you know this is still a favorite to me Charlie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2009 2:07:00 PM
Charles, congrats on being featured this week!
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Date: 5/16/2009 1:50:00 PM
Charles, nice work and congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 5/16/2009 9:04:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Congrats on being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/16/2009 6:41:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your feature! Izzy
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Date: 5/12/2009 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 5/12/2009 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your outstanding poetry being featured this week Charlie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2009 2:46:00 AM
well done on your featured poem great work, God bless from diane
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Date: 5/11/2009 4:05:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery for an inspirational write. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 5/11/2009 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent featured write of the week! (Hope your daughter is doing well.) Love, Shar
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Date: 5/11/2009 8:36:00 AM
Very beautiful language, I can feel your flair for the poetic. The star imagery feels very close to home as I just wrote a poem called 'Stranger' that also makes heavy use of the star as overall angelic guide through the journey. 'Forgiving my ways and absolving my sins' hits even closer to home actually. Truly briliant write, I wouldn't change a letter of it. -Yoni
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Date: 5/11/2009 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on "The Angel Star." being featured this week. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 5/11/2009 4:57:00 AM
I like the relaxed, even, dreamy flow of this one, Charles. Congrats on the pick. Love, daver
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Date: 5/11/2009 12:38:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Charles.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/10/2009 10:58:00 PM
Awesome write and congratulations on this featured poem. Ernilando
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