Shadow Hamilton Poet Narrative

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The conclusion of the Ancient Druid

The Ancient Druid 3

Balgar was starting to feel his age now and tired of travel sorted out a hidden 
cave in which to rest and make some potions. Once he had enough he went to the village two days away where he bartered and traded with locals then headed
to the pub to slack his thirst. When he left some tried to follow him and failed miserably for it was not the right time yet.
Balgar took a deep breath and carried on healing and seeking more knowledge
The more he learnt the wiser he became but at the same time grew more  stooped he now showed his age in each wrinkle. Once more he set off to the village where he traded with the locals and kept an open eye for a suitable 
man to train to fill his place. Sadly there was no one feeling his age he  stopped 
over night at the pub then set of for his cave many tried to follow him in vain
giving up as they lost him but one still followed him. 
In fact he could not shake her off she passed every test with ease. So Balgar headed for his cave still she was there finding the hidden entrance with ease.
Balgar questioned her and it become obvious that she was the chosen one she told him her name was Willow. We have much catching up to do said Balgar to
Willow as he began to teach her the secret druid ways. As she learnt Balgar gradually grew weaker and soon it was his time to join the other druids that  had  already passed on and so we leave Willow to learn and grow.

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Sotto Poet April 26, 2024 at 11:53 AM Dear Shadow, Life and death are intertwined in this marvelous poetry, which centers on the transmission of wisdom from one generation to another. Also discussed are the inevitabilities of aging and the search for a deserving successor. The elderly druid Balgar is the protagonist of your poetry; he is an aged druid who wishes to find a worthy heir to his wisdom. Your decision is direct, which is a testament to your skill as a storyteller. I pray that you are improving. Shadow Hamilton April 26, 2024 at 1:32 PM ty so much Sotto I should be about now that I have finished my new book. yes It was hard to say good bye to Balgar who lived his life the way he wanted to hugs Shadow

Paula Goldsmith April 26, 2024 at 10:31 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful story/write. You can write more to this/keep it going. Maybe turn it into a book. Hope you are OK/feeling better.... Have a wonderful/blessed ~ day/weekend writing away..................... Shadow Hamilton April 26, 2024 at 1:20 PM Its taken a while but yes am getting there ty Paula I know I could continue but it feels right to stop here. hugs Shadow

Daniel Henry Rodgers April 26, 2024 at 8:28 AM Dear Shadow, What a wonderful poem being on Balgar's journey, echoing the timeless themes of wisdom, mentorship, and passing the torch. I loved how your words evoke a sense of mystery and intrigue, drawing me into Balgar's world of ancient wisdom and hidden secrets. Your storytelling prowess shines through, capturing the essence of the druidic tradition with grace and depth. What an enchanting tale. - Blessings, Daniel Shadow Hamilton April 26, 2024 at 9:20 AM ty Daniel I admit to shredding a tear when Balgar passed. His story has been with me for quite some time and it was sad to say good bye I am glad you enjoyed it. hugs Shadow